Please refer to Activity 6.12, bottom of page 198, for the document you will revise. Also, read below for details that will help you get started.The material you will revise contains information that is poorly communicated in the following areas:audience connection/awarenessstyle/writing techniquesdocument designReflecting upon this week’s module, I want you to revise the existing document, thinking carefully about what you know about decision makers, how they read, what interests them, and what they are looking for in a document.Your audience is the Department Managers List. Christina Miranda invites department managers to three interviewing sessions to select student interns. However, to be effective, this message desperately needs revision. Study the message and list at least five weaknesses. Then revise to avoid excessive wordiness and repetition. Also think about how to develop an upbeat tone and improve readability. Can you reduce this sloppy 15-sentence message to six efficient sentences plus a list— and still convey all the necessary information?** Please supply a title for Christina Miranda at Cheyenne***The original document is an email. In your revision, please create a memo! Limit yourself to one page.You must maintain the topic and purpose of the original material; however, you are welcome to change style, develop content differently, and shape the design of the new document so that it more effectively meets the intended reader’s needs and expectations.
